remybeauvoir34 remybeauvoir34
  • 19-06-2017
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When Harold went racing down the hill on his sled. He hit a large bump and flew into the air, and landed safely on the ground.

How is the sentence fragment best corrected?

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sfk78 sfk78
  • 26-06-2017
Turn the first period into a comma. I would personally change "and" to but, it sounds better to me.
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